Wednesday, 26 March 2014

Hi There My Friend

Hi there my friend...do you mind if I describe you, as the world
You see before you... there wasn't much imaginary
If one tried, one would...soon be slapped down,

There were no encouraging words for me 

Don't you know... but since you, my grey matter, 
Somehow works overtime, my brain is so full off thoughts
I find it hard to separate them...so I write my words,
Some of them so full of woe...but you see my friend,


That's me you know, I try to write words ,
Some of them you don't like... but constructive criticism ,
Would be most welcome... as i am new at this game,
But I can't help that ...that's what's inside me,

Its hard for me... to separate the good the bad from the ugly
Don't you see...but since you...things changed drastically ,
My mind is so full , so full of everything
Until I write down... to relieve my poor brain ,


There's a mismatch of words... that I don't understand,
Sometimes its so crowded in my head,
That I can not sleep... it goes round and round
I have to say , please go away, let me sleep

So you see my friend... if I write something
You think its no right ...you can say ,that's a lot of crap.
Get it right !!! but in a nicer way ............

                                 By Connie James

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